The Patriot

The Patriot

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A poem about leadership.

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The Patriot

Short was his stature;

Crowds circled him to listen,

His aplomb drew them.

 

 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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i think this is something different, almost confused me.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great Job.

With love,

Jaidyn

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great Work!
That's really how other think of the statue.
Nice Written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I suck at writing Haikus, and I'm not saying that to be modest, or to put myself down, I mean I really crap out at it, my haikus never follow standard and they make no sense nor will they ever I'm betting on. So reading this, by the end of it I was in astonishment, because it flowed so well, it make perfect sense, it was wrapped around a beautiful concept and all around its a wonderful piece that I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine

Posted 14 Years Ago


I am reminded of the song Cult Of Personality when reading this... those with charisma can get people to lay down and die for them.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good tribute to the man. Love "aplomb!"

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmm I liked it! Very short,but with a great point at the end(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


The perfect Epitaph.

Posted 14 Years Ago


short, sweet, and to the point. Very nicely done.



Posted 14 Years Ago



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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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