The Patriot
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A poem about leadership.
The Patriot
Short was his stature;
Crowds circled him to listen,
His aplomb drew them.
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Reviews
i think this is something different, almost confused me.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great Job.
With love,
Jaidyn
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great Job.
With love,
Jaidyn
Great Work!
That's really how other think of the statue.
Nice Written.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great Work!
That's really how other think of the statue.
Nice Written.
I suck at writing Haikus, and I'm not saying that to be modest, or to put myself down, I mean I really crap out at it, my haikus never follow standard and they make no sense nor will they ever I'm betting on. So reading this, by the end of it I was in astonishment, because it flowed so well, it make perfect sense, it was wrapped around a beautiful concept and all around its a wonderful piece that I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine
Posted 14 Years Ago
I suck at writing Haikus, and I'm not saying that to be modest, or to put myself down, I mean I really crap out at it, my haikus never follow standard and they make no sense nor will they ever I'm betting on. So reading this, by the end of it I was in astonishment, because it flowed so well, it make perfect sense, it was wrapped around a beautiful concept and all around its a wonderful piece that I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine
I am reminded of the song Cult Of Personality when reading this... those with charisma can get people to lay down and die for them.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I am reminded of the song Cult Of Personality when reading this... those with charisma can get people to lay down and die for them.
Nice I like it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice I like it.
Very good tribute to the man. Love "aplomb!"
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very good tribute to the man. Love "aplomb!"
Hmm I liked it! Very short,but with a great point at the end(:
Posted 14 Years Ago
Hmm I liked it! Very short,but with a great point at the end(:
The perfect Epitaph.
Posted 14 Years Ago
The perfect Epitaph.
short, sweet, and to the point. Very nicely done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
short, sweet, and to the point. Very nicely done.
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Added on October 14, 2010
Last Updated on October 14, 2010
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Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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