Summer's Glow

A summer senyru.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Summer's Glow

Peaches, she smelled of;

Visceral notions led him,

Passion consumed them.

 

Reviews

[KL]

Yeah, the picture really compliments the poem and vice versa. Your vocabulary in your senryus is an awesome contrast between your normal writings... I see you combining the two in the future to create your ultimate voice.

[Steve]

Very sweet! WOW.

[Forever Mine]

sounds very tasty lol i love the picture, and the color... very nice

[David W Moore III]

ahh, fruit and passion, two great tastes that taste great together...
Nicely done!

[Wondering Mind]

What a way to go!!
Nicely done and loved the colour (our way of spelling color) effect

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful words boldly combined. Awesome

[Norma M Sutton]

Beautiful.

He was led by his gut to the smell of peaches. ;)