Summer's Glow

A summer senyru.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Summer's Glow

Peaches, she smelled of;

Visceral notions led him,

Passion consumed them.

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. I liked the romantic feel of the poem as well. Good job on this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Michael of Gilead]

Now I'm hungry....and hawt!

[Black Cat Fever]

A very romantic moment caught in a snap shot moment. Nicely done.

[Chelsea]

i do like this poem. it's simple but in a way captivating. maybe add a bit more detail?!?! but really well done though,

[M Garcia]

Great job. I love the picture. Thanks for sharing! I'm off to read more.

[Tina Kline]

Very nice and slightly erotic, just enough and not too much. I love this!

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice

[The Analog Kid]

Nice senyru. I like the color and could smell those delectable peaches!

[Moonflower]

Wonderful imagery, I liked this one.

[Miss Coral]

Simple, but very well done. Love the descriptions and word choice. c:

-Coral-