Carry Me Away

A poem of elation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Carry Me Away

Banging of the drums,

The cry of the electric guitar,

Breathes life into my fire tonight.

 

These electric currents seize through

My body constantly.

 

I get lost in the music,

Lost in your eyes,

As you make my hips rise.

 

 

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

The dance of romance... It can be a heady thing, and intoxicating as well. The rhythm of love is something many of us try to replicate, and never quite do, in our works. Nice.

I think that last line made my temperature rise.

[Liza]

heat rising
with songs complimenting your heart
body follows
fun!

[Alicia Schroeder]

beautiful expression of passion and music. nice

[Norma M Sutton]

Beautiful. Love that last stanza

[Wondering Mind]

I am elated.

[emmajoy]

Yet more passion ..the Cafe is full of elation and excitement .. it's playing its own music and everyone's dancing.

Those last three lines say it all!