Carry Me Away

A poem of elation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Carry Me Away

Banging of the drums,

The cry of the electric guitar,

Breathes life into my fire tonight.

 

These electric currents seize through

My body constantly.

 

I get lost in the music,

Lost in your eyes,

As you make my hips rise.

 

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Yes, I love this poem. Music can make you do all sort of things. Like sing, dance, sometimes it can give you inspiration to write something. This was a nice write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Music has the power to do all sorts of things. Nicely done.

[Michael of Gilead]

Hawt!

[M Garcia]

Cool. You can feel the beat.

[Tina Kline]

Music gets right down deep into us, very primitive just like a lot of other things that are part of nature that has a rhythm like the heart beat as well.

[tynamite]

This poem is great because it focuses on something about music that we miss. It makes me think of stuff. I've favourited it.

[YouoweYoupay]

I agree with Moonflower, music is soothing for the soul, and music that rocks the soul is just as good.

-Wella.

[Moonflower]

You captured the concept, Love this one..My boyfriend plays music, and the electric guitar is my favorite to listen to, very exciting ;)

[Mauricio Montoya]

sounds good cause the show must go on.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice juxtaposition of "banging, cry, breathes, body" with music. Sex and music are so closely related anyway:)