The Art of Spin

A senyru poem.

 

The Art of Spin

Insipid is life;

Without passion to dance in,

Love twirls and spins me.

 

Author's Note

A senyru about living your life with passion, enjoying life.

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

Black cat fever said it purrfectly

[Black Cat Fever]

I agree with you 100% on this one, life without passion is like being dead but aware of it.

[Akeen V.]

me too mee too
good no great job here

[Tina Kline]

I like this, very vivid in those few lines. Life without passion of some sort would be hard to take.

[Short.Nerd]

Very good. Nice job (:

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice

[Liza]

the irony is rich and true to senyru form
great job

[Abbie]

very good love does twirl us all

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doesn't it just...getting good at the senryu

[M Garcia]

Great senryu. Not many people know of this form of poetry. Thank you for sharing.