Beginnings Of Trouble

A poem of passion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Beginnings Of Trouble

 

Forbidden ripe fruit;

sin-filled kisses taste so good,

betrayal has won.

Author's Note

Forbidden love is delicious, but the beginnings of trouble too.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

That sure says it all! This is great. Temptation that can't be resisted.

[Norma M Sutton]

This is great.

I hate when betrayal wins.

[sarah]

This is good :)

[Charles]

Silly funny, the win came from the taste. Nice read.

[Michael X]

so sensuous and enticing, this here is passionate and the image gives
the entirety a brilliant effect, the poem itself is tantalyzing,
i really enjoyed this poem, yummy, thanks for sharing your talent,

[Dream Weaver]

As it mostly does...

[Short.Nerd]

Hmm is that scary music I hear?

Haha(: Good Job!!(:

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Oh man...trouble is a comin!

[Robin]

yes , most definitely