Beginnings Of Trouble

A poem of passion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Beginnings Of Trouble

 

Forbidden ripe fruit;

sin-filled kisses taste so good,

betrayal has won.

Author's Note

Forbidden love is delicious, but the beginnings of trouble too.

Reviews

[sushi]

A well written haiku......

[Mauricio Montoya]

short and bitter sweet

[M Garcia]

To some the forbidden is always best. Me, I like the norm, the non-forbidden. LOL. Great work. There's an intensity to this. Great work.

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so true..unfortunately..

[David W Moore III]

Ultimately sad. The excitement has led to downfall. And what happens next? Usually forbidden fruit is the first to rot.

[YouoweYoupay]

These few, true words demonstrate the deepest weaknesses inside us. They say: Absolute power leads to absolute corruption. And it is likewise with the human spirit. Giving in fully to the body, earthly desires only results in a very dark, horrifying fall for our cores. A fall that is contagious to the ones around. Like a plague. Although I find the quick submission in the last line a bit scary, I liked the truth in it. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella.

[Black Cat Fever]

Oh yes, the forbidden fruit, better not to taste, it only leads to trouble!

[TAO]

ah... If only... Honor keeps that beast betrayal at bay, much to the chagrin of a good friend of mine. Of course, we couldn't have it any other way. This one works.

[Michael of Gilead]

And your saying this was just the begining? ;)

[Cynthia]

Well, this is short, but really nice!
Tate of the poem is nice, my feeling after reading is ...
I don't Know.
However,
Nice Poem!