Traffic Patterns

A poem about patterns of fall.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Traffic Patterns

Canadian geese flocks fly over

Waving as if saying goodbye,

Honking their horns loudly too,

Making their routine journey home.

Winter will be here soon!

 

 

Reviews

[Author Rucha Joshi]

You created a nice winter mood with this one, very amazing, simple, to the point, yet in some ways thorough, very cute poem

Ugh, I heard a solo honk a couple weeks or so ago. I almost started bawling.

[TAO]

This poem would depress me if not for the...imagery... Lol...I can almost see a flock of geese like traffic on the way home. Forgive me; winter is my least favorite holiday, and I hate its coming...but this poem may make it that much easier to deal with. Well done.

[David W Moore III]

the honking did it for me ;) I do love winter (as seen by The World in D minor!) And while we don't have flocks of geese here, we used to have a tame pair on the pond at my house when we grew up.

[Norma M Sutton]

Love this. Honking horns and all.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the sight of geese flying over.. circling and crying out... You bring a vividness to this autumn wonder, and let us know the seasons are changing... Beautiful write!

[Michael of Gilead]

hehehehe...I wish they would go home! they just stop here and poop and get in the way. *sigh*

[Michael X]

this poem is stark yet gentle, it holds nature in the words,
i loved the imagery and the cascading wording, its such a lively picture,
graceful, the autumn sky flows through the wonderful soft vision
you have talent marie, keep it up

[The Analog Kid]

This is pretty cool. Cute. The geese are such a part of the season!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

lol I love it, "honking their horns"...and I love to see geese in flight!