Traffic Patterns

A poem about patterns of fall.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Traffic Patterns

Canadian geese flocks fly over

Waving as if saying goodbye,

Honking their horns loudly too,

Making their routine journey home.

Winter will be here soon!

 

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was lovely. Good job. I loved the imagery. Thanks for sharing. :)

[M Garcia]

Great work. Thanks for sharing.

[Akeen V.]

this is really good, very creative.

[Mauricio Montoya]

thats how feel I need to fly south. lol, nice work.

[Short.Nerd]

Haha love this! Great job (:

[Black Cat Fever]

I like this, its cute, never thought of geese flying through the sky as traffic patterns, but I can see how they would be. Delightful!

[KL]

Only thing I'd fix is 'their routine journey home,' because if they're making their way south then that means they're leaving home (hence the name Canadian geese ;)). Nice analogy regardless!

[Tina Kline]

I just love it when geese fly over in their V formation and I can hear their cries as they do. Fall is coming or is it spring? Love this!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I love this poem. The images are like watching a homecoming parade.

[Robin]

they are making their stop here already too ~