Kissing

A kiss of death with the dead.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kissed

Worms and maggots

Crawl out of his eyes

And his nose.

 

As he draws me close

To him and gropes clumsily

At my breasts

Underneath my clothes.

He knows I’m too scared

To move even my toes.

 

He’s robbing me of

My sanity,

As he pulls me

Into his

Concave musty chest.

 

He opens his grey torn lips,

As he dips me backwards

Holding my head in his

Mangled hands,

As he sticks his

Putrid slimy green

Tongue into

Mine mouth,

While bellowing out a moan

Of eternal death.

 

I’ve been

Kissed by a Zombie!

 

Author's Note

I'll never be the same!

Reviews

[Cynthia]

'A kiss of death with the dead'
I think it's a nice intruduction.
Your first parts of your poem is a kind of gross
'Worms and maggots

Crawl out of his eyes

And his nose.'
I don't feel so good about it....
The ending is kind of fun, a big difference between.
I smile a little bit at the end.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Oooo... zombified. Don't think I'll ever be the same, just thinking ah that one.
Ha ha ha... loved that, too cool. Fitting, 13 reviews when I got here. In Spanish they say, "Tocate" whenever 13 is seen, or mentioned. Weirdly enough... it means, 'touch yourself.' Happy all hallows eve! As the dead, will give of themselves... and, kissses maybe? lol
Lots of reponce for a one day posting, fame can be hard on a body, eh!
...not

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It made me smile at the end, but your images had my stomach doing backflips.
What a frightening but awe inspiring portrait.

[ebonpinion]

Wow. To be kissed by a zombie. Now that would be an interesting experience.

[Norma M Sutton]

EWWW and neither will I. YUCK YUCK YUCK rofl

[Short.Nerd]

Well this will certainly make people think twice about kissing. Haha Good Job!! (: This is really good espicalley with Halloween on the way (:

[nono]

Okay! 13 and never had my first kiss innocence is a pain! lol my friends are all like Fallon we're getting you a boyfriend this year I'm like whatever. . . lol I like this though it's cute and after your first 100th whatever I guess kissing is never the same lol I like this a lot and I wouldn't know exactly lol You did a nice job on this!

[Steve]

Never be the same??? Allow me to demonstrate what he SHOULD have done.....lol

Wow. this was incredibly hideous!!

[Michael of Gilead]

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

[YouoweYoupay]

Oh my f*****g....*covers mouth and shudders* HAHAHA this is really new, horrifying to imagine, exciting. A zombie cliche twisted in the most disgusting erotic image ever. I conratulate you. lol! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

-Wella.