Kissing

A kiss of death with the dead.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kissed

Worms and maggots

Crawl out of his eyes

And his nose.

 

As he draws me close

To him and gropes clumsily

At my breasts

Underneath my clothes.

He knows I’m too scared

To move even my toes.

 

He’s robbing me of

My sanity,

As he pulls me

Into his

Concave musty chest.

 

He opens his grey torn lips,

As he dips me backwards

Holding my head in his

Mangled hands,

As he sticks his

Putrid slimy green

Tongue into

Mine mouth,

While bellowing out a moan

Of eternal death.

 

I’ve been

Kissed by a Zombie!

 

Author's Note

I'll never be the same!

Reviews

[al25]

Really didnt think this poem was going to end up like this from the title. Anyway I like the twist kind of like Im in a movie.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is a good poem. It was kind of creepy. I liked that though. I wouldn't ever let a zombie kiss me though. I would have been creeped if they tried to kiss me. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

[tynamite]

Nooooooooooooooo!
Very good poem. Nice concept. I've favourited it.

[Nimbus Thread]

Ah, nothing like zombie love with coffee in the morning. Nicely done!

[Black Cat Fever]

An awful experience, kissing the living dead! Great poem!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Geeeez, what a deathly experience.

Cute, funny and extremely well written.

I love it.

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Mauricio Montoya]

whoa!

[Shalini Dinesh]

kissed by a zombie??? my god i would hate a kiss in my life if something like this happens for true... very scary....

[M Garcia]

Ok. Creepy. You could this one for a Halloween contest. Nicely written Marie.

[Miss Coral]

Ughh... gross. c:


This seemed really random- not a bad thing, just random. I would consider putting some metaphorical descriptions into this- it seems a little bare bones with the description variations.
Overall, nicely done.
Well penned.