Moon Drops

A fantasy poem about the moon for children.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moon Drops

Mr. Moon,

Why do you

Wink at me?

 

Don't you know it's

Only noon.

 

It's too soon

To crawl in my

Cocoon to go

To sleep.

 

I need to fish,

I need to eat,

I need to play

In the lagoon

With the other

Raccoons.

 

Why are you always 

Winking at me

Mr. Moon?

 

Or is there

A moon drop

In your eye?

 

Maybe celestial

Beings get

The blues

Too?

 

Are you lonesome

For someone to swoon

With, Mr. Moon?

 

 

 

Author's Note

I was thinking of children when I wrote this poem.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good tale for a child. I think they would really enjoy this poem. It's good that you can think about what a child would be able to read and understand. You did a really good job on this. Thanks for sharing.

[Jeff Loquist]

i think i will read this to my children

[Mauricio Montoya]

cute!

[Black Cat Fever]

And this is a perfect poem for children. I found it a delight to read and I am pretty sure children would love it!

[Fran Marie]

a great poem with a smooth flow and rhyme scheme~ very nicE!

[Madame Mystique]

I loved this poem, I'm a huge lunatic (if you get my drift :P)
I could spend endless hours staring at the moon beautiful :)

[Short.Nerd]

I love this!!

Or is there

A moon drop

In your eye?


That has to be my favorite line for some reason xD

[James Bonner]

you have a great way of expressing yourself through your poetry. Its unique and exciting. playful.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like the short line structure. The starts and stops add to it.

[Miss Coral]

Ahh! I love it. :D

Great rhyme scheme and playfulness. c:

-Coral-