Seducing The Jazz Butterfly

A poem about jazz.

 

"Seducing The

Jazz Butterfly"

Sax, how you

Float up and down

Zigzagging through

Your high squeaky notes

And sultry throaty tones,

Slyly caressing

My silky flesh

Buttons nightly.

 

Seductively

You spread

My bejeweled and

 Speckled  wings open,

Pensively peering into the hollow

Mystic caverns of my

Melancholy soul.

 

Oh, how well

You know me,

Discovering more

Each twilight melody

You magically produce.

 

With the wandering smooth palm

Of your steady hand,

You seduce me discreetly

In front of a smokey

Crowded room.

 

Your trilling rhapsody

Lifts me up with such electric elation 

To soar and peak in the

Twinkling celestial

Skies high above.

 

Yet so quickly,

Your intoxicating low

Staccato beat

Stomps me out,

Like the butt of a used

Cigarette.

 

Each jazzy encore

My zealous wings

Flutter back for more,

They're addicted to your

Smoldering night heat.

 

Author's Note

I'm addicted to live jazz. I'm not sure about the title. I'm still tweaking this one.

Reviews

[Muse]

This is cool! I love the title, don't change it. I loved the word play, the font, the sexiness of this write. Well done!

[KAREN]

A excellent enjoyable read, hot and romantic!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So beautifully written, felt like I was at a jazz concert! Excellent piece

[Tina Kline]

This is really wonderful! I love it! The outstanding imagery in this only enhance how excellent this poem is!

[?]

oooooooooooh girl I do love jazz and I dooooooo love the sax. The sax is so sultry, sexy, and just wows me, it moves me. Just like this poem, it is beautiful.
Awesome piece Marie

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Great mealodious flow of zigzag.. nice

[Darkest Rose]

I love this! Don't tweak it to much because it's great as it is! The wording is amazing just like the poem. Music is like part of the soul, it connects to people on so many different levels. Fab write :)

[Chris]

Jazz does that - 'tweaks' you.

Chris

[Rene Velez]

this is read like a melody the way it trickles down, it has it's own rhythm...nice one.

[sugar]

those are some big words you were using lmaooo...such a wonderful poem...great job agian 100/100