in the snow

A winter poem.

 

in the snow

 

angel white is your soft blanket

that you wrap around me

 

smothering me with kisses

all over my red face

to keep me warm while

your white blanket of snow

chills me

 

lets go toast by the fire

to admire the artwork

that God's blessed us with

 

wrapped in blankets of red

who knows what will become

of our love that was once dead

 

flowers bloom yet again from

what was once considered dead

 

let us sip from love's heavenly

cup of love again tonight

while our heart's are light

like snowflakes

 

let's partake of our portion of

love from heaven's own 

fresh baked angelfood cake

laid out on our table of love

 

let's give our love breath again

by the firelight tonight

 

as love shines in your eyes

so brightly

the reflection might blind me

but that's okay

 

it's the most

heavenly sight I've seen

 

since the snow started to

fall all around us at

daylight today

as we giggled and played

in the snow

 

funny how

love grows

again in the

snow

 

keep showering

me with kisses

my snow angel

 

my heart glows

with love for

you in this

blanket of snow

 

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Summer refreshment! Pour some cherry juice on this snow cone!

Then fast forward to winter and this is one cozy scene bringing back highlight memories, for there's nothing sweeter and more highly charged than erotic romance by a fireplace when it's snowing, a cold bite in the air outside.

"let's partake of our portion of
love from heaven's own
fresh baked angelfood cake
laid out on our table of love"

These lines add hearty sweetness to the snow/fireplace/kisses juxtaposition.

This poem is like receiving a romantic Christmas greeting in summer to cool the oppressive heat, yet warm the lonely ache.

The season of love is all seasons.

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful piece... the imagery and gentle emotion in this was captivating. The only thing I would even think to suggest would be to change the second "dead" from this:

"wrapped in blankets of red
who knows what will become
of our love that was once dead

flowers bloom yet again from
what was once considered dead"


Otherwise.. excellent.

-Coral-

[Robyn]

so beautiful

[Robin]

very well written and expressed . wonderful sentiment and a smooth flow of emotion

[Norma M Sutton]

This is lovely.