in the snow

A winter poem.

 

in the snow

 

angel white is your soft blanket

that you wrap around me

 

smothering me with kisses

all over my red face

to keep me warm while

your white blanket of snow

chills me

 

lets go toast by the fire

to admire the artwork

that God's blessed us with

 

wrapped in blankets of red

who knows what will become

of our love that was once dead

 

flowers bloom yet again from

what was once considered dead

 

let us sip from love's heavenly

cup of love again tonight

while our heart's are light

like snowflakes

 

let's partake of our portion of

love from heaven's own 

fresh baked angelfood cake

laid out on our table of love

 

let's give our love breath again

by the firelight tonight

 

as love shines in your eyes

so brightly

the reflection might blind me

but that's okay

 

it's the most

heavenly sight I've seen

 

since the snow started to

fall all around us at

daylight today

as we giggled and played

in the snow

 

funny how

love grows

again in the

snow

 

keep showering

me with kisses

my snow angel

 

my heart glows

with love for

you in this

blanket of snow

 

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Summer refreshment! Pour some cherry juice on this snow cone!

Then fast forward to winter and this is one cozy scene bringing back highlight memories, for there's nothing sweeter and more highly charged than erotic romance by a fireplace when it's snowing, a cold bite in the air outside.

"let's partake of our portion of
love from heaven's own
fresh baked angelfood cake
laid out on our table of love"

These lines add hearty sweetness to the snow/fireplace/kisses juxtaposition.

This poem is like receiving a romantic Christmas greeting in summer to cool the oppressive heat, yet warm the lonely ache.

The season of love is all seasons.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I really like the imagery in this. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

for some reason I get a chilling affect from this write. nice work.

[Liza]

the colors chosen represented lots of purity and passion
excellent imagery and emotion

[Michael of Gilead]

Ahhhh....a cool poem for a hot night :)

[Radioactive]

Makes me really want winter to come soon, as it is my favourite season. This poem gives off a very calm vibe, much like winter itself.

'wrapped in blankets of red
who knows what will become
of our love that was once dead'

Brings back memories from last year!

XX Maddie

[Taylor H.]

beautiful!

[tynamite]

pffft. I like the last paragraph the best. There's some skill there.

[Black Cat Fever]

The snow might be cold but their love isn't any longer. All the cold snow brought them very close together physically and which brought them back together emotionally in their love, it seems. A sweet, tender and romantic winter tale.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a sweet poem. I gave me a chill..then warmed me by a savory flame in the fireplace. I'm digging the smooth clean style. Very Classy.

[Dream Weaver]

You're on a roll here Marie.
Nicely done and beautifully
written I must say...