The Wonder Of His Emergence

A birthday poem.

 

The Wonder Of His Emergence

That spotted moth on the

Shoulder of your wife beater

Tells me that you’re a

Mysterious Goth and

Rock ‘n roll sloth.

 

Your bell tolls as your

Spirit roams freely through

Out the desert land,

As you spread your

Mysticism to all.

 

You’re an eclectic sort of man,

Who entered this world to use

His ideas not his hands.

 

We’re so fortunate to know you

And to have our spindly

Thoughts reviewed by you.

 

The world would be certainly

Lax in spice, fire and sparkle

Without the emergence of Pax

Onto this cold heartless earth.

Today we thank the universe

For the day of your birth.

 

Happy Birthday Pax!

 

Author's Note

Happy Birthday Pax, to a great man.

Reviews

[KL]

This is a really cool poem, I dig it. Your wordplay in this is very interesting and captures both the eye and mind. The lapse between rhyme and non-rhyme is executed at perfect intervals, maintaining a very smooth flow. Happy birthday Pax, whomever you are.

[Talkativeted]

A really lovely poem. I wasn't expecting the birthday message.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice poem indeed. Didn't think it was a birthday wish till I read the last line!

[Norma M Sutton]

A very nice birthday wish.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a fun little birthday greeting. I can see he was pleased and thats all that mattered.

[Pax Analog]

I'm astonished, Marie!

Some have said some deep things over certain writings or reviews -- I just hadn't realized I was making a strong impression on you.

Thanks very much for an eloquent and delightful birthday surprise!