The Wonder Of His Emergence

A birthday poem.

 

The Wonder Of His Emergence

That spotted moth on the

Shoulder of your wife beater

Tells me that you’re a

Mysterious Goth and

Rock ‘n roll sloth.

 

Your bell tolls as your

Spirit roams freely through

Out the desert land,

As you spread your

Mysticism to all.

 

You’re an eclectic sort of man,

Who entered this world to use

His ideas not his hands.

 

We’re so fortunate to know you

And to have our spindly

Thoughts reviewed by you.

 

The world would be certainly

Lax in spice, fire and sparkle

Without the emergence of Pax

Onto this cold heartless earth.

Today we thank the universe

For the day of your birth.

 

Happy Birthday Pax!

 

Author's Note

Happy Birthday Pax, to a great man.

Reviews

[KL]

This is a really cool poem, I dig it. Your wordplay in this is very interesting and captures both the eye and mind. The lapse between rhyme and non-rhyme is executed at perfect intervals, maintaining a very smooth flow. Happy birthday Pax, whomever you are.

[Tate Morgan]

A ver y nice tribute to one of the worlds most enlightened gentleman

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Cool poem. I hope he appreciated it. He probably loves you. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

This is a grand happy birth wish and a great tribute.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Ok HAPPY B DAY PAX
Thanks for the invitation to this party.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

neat prose... Happy Birthday Pax!!! :0

[Wicahpi]

I don't know this person, but this is a lovely Birthday poem.
Well done! x

[Steve]

I like it!! I love the interesting descriptions and the humor too.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

nice poem. inspiration in motion.