Cosmic Love

A love poem.

 

Cosmic Love

High up above

On my toe shoes

That fit like a glove,

I long to spin on Mercury’s

Moon drops of love,

 

Where I’d bat my

Eyelashes at the

Stars that

Twinkle above.

 

I’d twirl around

 In a celestial

Wonder, scattering

Glittery moon dust

Into outer space.

 

Leaping over

The Big Dipper,

I’d float around Orion

Without making

A sound.

 

I’d star gaze,

As thoughts of

Your movie star face

Would blaze through

My mind.

 

Pouring a glass of

Orbit’s Sparkling Wine

I’d make a toast

To Your Heavenly Reign

And my crystal goblet

High I’d raise.

 

For you’re my

Moonbeam King,

Let’s flee up above

In our nuclear rocket ship,

Where we’ll

Make cosmic love.

 

 

Reviews

[G. Anderson]

The color and font did not go over well with Gage's migraine... xD
Other than that, the rhyme was bold but subtle, giving the impression of natural rhythm. Most poets have trouble with rhyme schemes, and I've often found it to be distracting :/

Other than that, I loved the simplistic theme.

~Gage

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice poem. Beautiful imagery. I like it!

[writing mojo]

Great poem, I never saw it that way
the star stances you recreate

[Alice_In_WhateverLand]

a mystical write, i really enjoyed reading your fantasy :)

[Deeply Daisy]

really fun and sweet. Liked the imagery too. another lovely poem!

[J.S. Pua]

dreamy..
imaginative..
great work..

[Forever Mine]

This is playfully Romantic. Wonderful : )

[Black Cat Fever]

Reaching the heights of passion and love, going out as far as you can and then a little bit further. Quite romantic with a lot of playfulness too. Very visual in its beauty as well. Outstanding write.

[Dream Weaver]

What a wonderful trippy cosmic write..
or was that Kosmik? lol great write
Marie...

[Pax Analog]

Spacey, meringue-y mind dessert. Playful and enjoyable -- could see it as text on a poster, perhaps a Peter Max kinda style (poster impression emphasized by your use of large font).

Soundtrack choice between Moody Blues and Pink Floyd. ;-)

[Fran Marie]

making cosmic love with a moonbeam king~

sounds delightful~lovely write to be sure