Cosmic Love
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A love poem.
Cosmic Love
High up above
On my toe shoes
That fit like a glove,
I long to spin on Mercury’s
Moon drops of love,
Where I’d bat my
Eyelashes at the
Stars that
Twinkle above.
I’d twirl around
In a celestial
Wonder, scattering
Glittery moon dust
Into outer space.
Leaping over
The Big Dipper,
I’d float around Orion
Without making
A sound.
I’d star gaze,
As thoughts of
Your movie star face
Would blaze through
My mind.
Pouring a glass of
Orbit’s Sparkling Wine
I’d make a toast
To Your Heavenly Reign
And my crystal goblet
High I’d raise.
For you’re my
Moonbeam King,
Let’s flee up above
In our nuclear rocket ship,
Where we’ll
Make cosmic love.
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Featured Review
The color and font did not go over well with Gage's migraine... xD
Other than that, the rhyme was bold but subtle, giving the impression of natural rhythm. Most poets have trouble with rhyme schemes, and I've often found it to be distracting :/
Other than that, I loved the simplistic theme.
~Gage
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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very imaginative , and fun well done Marie
Posted 14 Years Ago
very imaginative , and fun well done Marie
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I really like the third stanza, great use of imagery :). As well, the whole thing fit's love perfectly as space is something hard to reach full of light and darkness which I find great to use in comparison.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I really like the third stanza, great use of imagery :). As well, the whole thing fit's love perfectly as space is something hard to reach full of light and darkness which I find great to use in comparison.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very nice....your imagination Marie is amazing.....I like this!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice....your imagination Marie is amazing.....I like this!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love it! Lighthearted and full of cosmic metaphors! Brilliant :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I love it! Lighthearted and full of cosmic metaphors! Brilliant :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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