Cosmic Love

A love poem.

 

Cosmic Love

High up above

On my toe shoes

That fit like a glove,

I long to spin on Mercury’s

Moon drops of love,

 

Where I’d bat my

Eyelashes at the

Stars that

Twinkle above.

 

I’d twirl around

 In a celestial

Wonder, scattering

Glittery moon dust

Into outer space.

 

Leaping over

The Big Dipper,

I’d float around Orion

Without making

A sound.

 

I’d star gaze,

As thoughts of

Your movie star face

Would blaze through

My mind.

 

Pouring a glass of

Orbit’s Sparkling Wine

I’d make a toast

To Your Heavenly Reign

And my crystal goblet

High I’d raise.

 

For you’re my

Moonbeam King,

Let’s flee up above

In our nuclear rocket ship,

Where we’ll

Make cosmic love.

 

 

Reviews

[G. Anderson]

The color and font did not go over well with Gage's migraine... xD
Other than that, the rhyme was bold but subtle, giving the impression of natural rhythm. Most poets have trouble with rhyme schemes, and I've often found it to be distracting :/

Other than that, I loved the simplistic theme.

~Gage

[dangerbooze]

I loved it. Sorry, I got to it kind of late.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was fierce. I love it. Last line was cool. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

may the force be with you.
nice work, well done.

[tynamite]

Whoa! It's hard for me to take this poem seriously with all these space similies. This is too much in a good way. ;) Cosmic love in a nuclear rocket ship. o_O

[Legion]

That was wonderfully delightful. Cute. ;)

Have you let that Moonbeam King read this?

[al25]

Nice playful poem you've got there

[Undying Glory]

yep, "mystic" is right. you've expressed love in a very unique way, that's really good. i really like your style here. good job

[nickchidiac]

the ending is real cool, i like the rhyme scheme

[Miss Coral]

Great piece... I love the imagery. c: