Beyond Heaven's Gate

A haiku about heaven.

Beyond Heaven's Gate

 

Streams of crystal blue;
Colorful birds tweet and fly,
skip on streets of gold.

Author's Note

I could live in a place like this for a while, as long as dogs were there!

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

Uplifting piece.. the only thing I would think about changing is to expand your word choice. Otherwise, great imagery, nice piece. c:

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Heaven isn't too far away as long as we continue to dream... short, sweet and very uplifting poem.

[Bubo]

Easy to imagine the joy of being in such a place........and it uplifts!