Rock Queen

A poem about wanting to be a Rock Queen.

 

Rock Queen

 

Tad you come to me in dreams,

in them your jeans have no seams,

and you’re eating a bowl full of bright jelly beans.

 

But your rock hard abs are the best I’ve seen,

they make me wish that I was your curvy Rock Queen.

When I think of other women ravishing you,

I become green with mean!

 

Okay, it’s time for me to come clean.

I’m really just another under paid maid on your cleaning team,

every Thursday it’s your clothing that I wash and steam.

Could I still be your Rock Queen?

 

 

Author's Note

Okay this is really silly, but what can I say.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Nothing like what I was expecting from the title!
I was thinking music or perhaps that lady by the sea that has collected vast amounts of pretty sea stones...boy was I wrong! lol

I think this piece falls into the catagory of a day dream. I certainly makes one take a second thought when taking their clothes to the cleaners or who might be sent to tidy up after them, and what they are thinking.

I loved it's silliness!

Hugs!
Wolfie

[TadKent]

Flattering! Wait... I don't have a maid... = o

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Ha. Very good poem. It's thought-provoking. Like, it makes me ponder on this wannabe rock queen and I wonder more about her life and relationship with this hard-abbed rocker. lol. Does he know she exists? Does he feel the same? It's a good piece because it makes me ask questions/wanna know more. I like it.
KH

[Randy`s Princess]

well I got a thing for men with a six pack to avid wrestling fan so this is nice wishing and wanting all at once not silly at all

[Lotus]

From the two poems i have read so far you sound like a house wife who doesn't get laid too much and reads too many cheesy romance novels...
May be wrong but it's just my first impression.

As far as your poem goes, The concept..eh not my thing but some people like it. Your rhyme scheme seemed broken and very simple.

Your stanza's don't read very smoothly either, i suggest trying to use lines with close to the same amount of syllables It will smooth it out a little.

[dangerbooze]

Silliness at its best. I love it!