My Thoughts Of You

A poem about desire

My Thoughts Of You

 

How can I have you

when you belong

to another?

 

My heart says

it's wrong,

but my body says

forget about it,

what's done is done.

 

That relationship

is wrung out already!

 

How can I run

you out of me?

How far will 

I have to run 

to flee from you,

to be free from you?

 

When all I

can think about

is you embracing me.

 

My mind soars when

I think about you.

My body roars with

delight with the

thought of your

hands touching me.

How great that would be!

 

But what prize

would I have won?

 

This isn't the first

time you've run out on her.

I could be the next one

you run out on.

 

Knowing that is my

dark place where

no sun exists.

 

Life's no fun

living like this,

maybe it's better

to just be alone.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Minki]

I love the image of her fantasizing about being embraced by her beloved, and how she still desires him even though his love is unrequited. Your poetry captures the ups and downs of being in love very nicely.

[whiteowl]

I really like the way this poem shows true filling towards a love and a fear, none truely gets that the filling is greta and means alot to those out there who always fill that way i know i do at times in my life.

[Liza]

i sense the burning passion in this write; it burns so hot that the person described is describing the possible danger of burning themselves out...
i've been there...i know...