Tempation

A cinquain poem about tempation.

 

 

Tempting

Bulging curves

Fleshly rounding mountains

Roaming eyes see her shapely form

 Cleavage 

Reviews

[Sasha]

I like how the first two lines come together to make "Tempting Cleavage". You descrived the rest of the temptation well, too. They're bulging round mountains and her form is shapely. That's all the imagery I need. Well done.

[alesuriko]

Simple, short. I like the use of fleshly but this poem lacks something for me.