The Suit

A poem about a business man.

The Suit

 

His charm is his strongest skill.

In his black business suit

he’s so handsome,

his looks help seal the deal.

 

But the root of the problem is his love for

the bottle and how hot his throttle is for

teenage models,

the same age as his daughter.

 

He travels all the time on business,

living out of his suitcase.

His expense account keeps him

Locked and loaded most of the time.

 

 

Jets take him all over the globe,

but his life is going nowhere,

but in the bottle and the hot throttle

between his legs, where a

hot model’s head is.

 

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

A story poem about a business man who is emotionally detached to the world around him. He lives life traveling the world for business. He's addicted to sexy young models and boose.

[ashley]

Damn. This is good. Keep it up! :D

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

i think marie this is a very witty and fresh write..there is something very naked very real about your words and it has a rustic appeal to it..

[Liza]

I like the rhyme to it.. I had a boss like this; he inspired a poem about his ways ...will send a read request :)