Soldier

A diamante poem about soldiers

soldiers

brave, fearless

protecting, defending, preserving

brave-hearts, heroes, savages, mongrels

murdering, forcing, terrorizing

evil, sneaky

terrorists

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poem tells the truth. It is where you are standing. Here in the USA our Soldiers are heroes. But standing in a foreign land. The people of that country see men who want to steal and take. A outstanding poem. You wrote the truth.
Coyote

[Chelsea]

Good call on the diamante poem! It worked really well because you had the pros of wars than the cons! It was a clever choice for sure :)

[Norma M Sutton]

This is neat. Flip sides of a similar coin.

[Short.Nerd]

Very truthful! Amazing job (:

[sarah]

Wow! I love this poem great job with this!

[Linear]

Er ok so which are the soldiers, all of the above, great sentiment though

[OT]

nice play on synonymous adjectives almost - a very descriptive poem! also like the mirror reflection - the change from the soldiers into the terrorists!! nice!

[xx_strawberry_xx]

Clever and its true. You sort of wrote more than one point of view about soldiers, which is what I really liked the most about it. Nice Job :D

[Ladysue]

This is unique and very cleverly done...you speak with truth and wisdom...good work...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem is true. I like the symmetry because It really makes you question why it is that we have to go through this and where does the line get crossed. ....Bravo!

[hannajade]

Ohh I remember when I learned how to write diamonte poems last year in my english class, i love how they are!!