locket love

free verse love poem

locket love

 

your tender caress

leaves me

in urgent duress

 

for I'm parched

so

thirsty for more

 

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time

 

       four

             three

                     two

                           one

 

                               

                              shoot me off to

                              the moon after you lift off

 

 

my heart

was tucked

deep inside

your blue

denim pocket

 

from the

moment

you gave me

my first gold

locket with

your picture

inside

 

so you could

ride along

being strung

on my gold chain

only to

be near my

heart box

 

even when we

are physically apart

your golden locket

is a part of me

now

reminding

me who

carries my

heart in their

blue jean pocket

Reviews

[...]

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time



four

three

two

one





shoot me off to

the moon after you lift off

... these lines are brilliant!!! ... the poem is sheer genius!!! ... it's awesome to read you ... this verse is so creative ... moving ... passionate and enchanting ... what a lovely read ... :) ...

[E.H. Monroe]

my heart
was tucked
deep inside
your blue
denim pocket

Great. Who the f**k didn't wanna get all emotional pre noon?
This guy.
Who did?
This guy
Damn you and your pocket hearts.

The beginning was about to have that ol porn kick, and then you pulled the rug out nicely.

Great read

[Shalini Dinesh]

Nice poem, it was different to read with modern technicalities...

[Brianna Brie]

shoot me off to

the moon after you lift off

I like the momentum in this poem. It hints to naughty but stays sweet and innocent. Nicely written!

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is gentle and sweet. I like the feeling and emotion of love. To carry a part of someone can make us content and happy. Total poem was outstanding. A excellent poem. You are a very good writer. Thank you for sharing.

Coyote