locket love

free verse love poem

locket love

 

your tender caress

leaves me

in urgent duress

 

for I'm parched

so

thirsty for more

 

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time

 

       four

             three

                     two

                           one

 

                               

                              shoot me off to

                              the moon after you lift off

 

 

my heart

was tucked

deep inside

your blue

denim pocket

 

from the

moment

you gave me

my first gold

locket with

your picture

inside

 

so you could

ride along

being strung

on my gold chain

only to

be near my

heart box

 

even when we

are physically apart

your golden locket

is a part of me

now

reminding

me who

carries my

heart in their

blue jean pocket

Reviews

[...]

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time



four

three

two

one





shoot me off to

the moon after you lift off

... these lines are brilliant!!! ... the poem is sheer genius!!! ... it's awesome to read you ... this verse is so creative ... moving ... passionate and enchanting ... what a lovely read ... :) ...

[.]

it's like a song, in fact it would be great lyrics!

[Cynthia]

What a lovely and sweet poem! I love it!
'each time we part
my engine powers up
like a NASA space rocket
counting down
till that orgasmic
blast off time
four
three
two
one
shoot me off to
the moon after you lift off'
What a wonderful staza! Tgis lines moves me as you say them!

[Tina Kline]

Love this! It's very fun and romantic, very playful. Excellent job!

[KAREN]

Another good write! Love the flow and set up!!

[Short.Nerd]

I love it!! It was a beautiful poem. Nice job (:

[Sunny Skye]

Beutiful i love this poem expecially the way you wrote it. Very good.

-SkyeBlanco

[Arsenic Nemesis]

This is just so beautiful, I loved it so much. Everything about it was perfect... nay, sheer bliss! I loved it beyond words, keep up the good work!~

[Linear]

Oh o sweet Marie mine, you got this one nailed a locket outside a pocket near to heart to be so inclined, forever together within a golden heart with pictures to find, gosh i wish you were mine, (just joking) honest. Great free flowing work

[Moflo]

I love the onomatopoeia of your works. The structure really plays in well with this one and there are some very very very powerful images. Nice write

[SR Urie]

Swweeet Marie; muah!