locket love

free verse love poem

locket love

 

your tender caress

leaves me

in urgent duress

 

for I'm parched

so

thirsty for more

 

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time

 

       four

             three

                     two

                           one

 

                               

                              shoot me off to

                              the moon after you lift off

 

 

my heart

was tucked

deep inside

your blue

denim pocket

 

from the

moment

you gave me

my first gold

locket with

your picture

inside

 

so you could

ride along

being strung

on my gold chain

only to

be near my

heart box

 

even when we

are physically apart

your golden locket

is a part of me

now

reminding

me who

carries my

heart in their

blue jean pocket

Reviews

[...]

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time



four

three

two

one





shoot me off to

the moon after you lift off

... these lines are brilliant!!! ... the poem is sheer genius!!! ... it's awesome to read you ... this verse is so creative ... moving ... passionate and enchanting ... what a lovely read ... :) ...

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Wow, this was brilliant~ beautiful descriptions~

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love the set up of this poem, and the imagery was fabulous!

[OT]

very nice!! a charming little piece with lots of energy!!

[Jibey]

It was neat! You used the idea with charm and a clever trail of words - nice to be remembered in someone's pocket!

[Mauricio Montoya]

The air is full of love lately. Nice work well done.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wonderfully interesting style, form, and description! love it!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the creativity in this poem. Love explained in a unique way. The flow is easy to follow and I love the unique style that you wrote this in. I love the blue jean jacket part

[Frank F. Atanacio]

a creative streaming flow of well ....eroticism

[Liza]

the tension was intense and subtle - great job with imagery - very sensual write about longing and physical delight

[Jessica]

I love the sentence
'each time we part
my engine powers up
like a NASA space rocket
counting down
till that orgasmic
blast off time
four
three
two
one
shoot me off to
the moon after you lift off'!
i love this poem! It is so creative , moving , passionate and enchanting. I feel funny and playful. you did a great job!
Welldone!