French Twist

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

French Twist

Hearing lovers kiss and talk,

as the gentle night wind of spring blows by.

Drinking coffee and writing poetry tastes tepid

compared to what they have on their plate.

 

If only we could switch positions,

they could drink French roast

from a french press ,

and I’ll french kiss a hot guy

and talk his ear off.

 

Reviews

[Abbie]

very cool and i wish you could switch a lot ofn things :)



100/100

[Blake Q Hatfield]

I can relate to this poem (well minus wanting to make out with the hot guy.) Sometimes I'd rather live the poem than write it.

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nice thought..the images were crisp and had a certain oh la la!

[Mauricio Montoya]

all this over cafe. nice!

[Tina Kline]

I like this. If only....
Great job!

[Michael of Gilead]

Talk just his ear off? ;)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

cute! i like this a lot!

[Jeff Bresee]

Nice. What else is there to say.

[Undying Glory]

nice work, this was very cool! i must agree, that last stanza was very good. good job!

[sarah]

I LOVE the last stanza this poem is amazing! great work