Love, in brief

was just simply inspired

It's hard to breathe when you're not around.

Hard to wake and hard to sleep.

Hard to smile, hard to weep.

Because how can I be,

when it is only me

and not we?

Reviews

[Honeypot]

This is sweet and simple and that's the brillance of it. It hits on exactly how a person feels when they love somebody so much that they don't want to be apart from them.

[Billy the Kid]

I'm glad you have this line: "hard to smile, hard to weep"

Yours,
Billy the Kid

[Bare trees]

Good inspiration. Short and simple, to the point, and makes a lot of sense when you've fallin for someone you can't live without. Nice!