Oh MY Valiant Kings

Oh MY Valiant Kings

A Poem by chhimijiks
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Dedicated to my kings.

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O! My Valiant Kings

O! My valiant kings

The leaders of peace

The kings of compassion

The chiefs of love

The primes of happiness

 

O! My valiant kings

Before thy rule we vow

Thy praise citizens sing

Thy nation glimmer with GNH décor

 The unfaltering happiness stands as development core

 

O! My valiant kings

Heavenly envy! For thy tiny nation

Glows in happiness,

Sparkles in beauties of love,

Smiles in peace.

No earthly languages have ability to describe happiness in thy nation.

Thou art godly in the earth.

 We worship YOUR MAJESTIES.

 

Chimi


Norbuling Central School

© 2016 chhimijiks


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Thank u so much for ur invaluable comments. This poem is still crude. I want to polish it after seeing the reviews.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is really good. The purpose is kind of hard to grasp, but overall its a nice flowing poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Gyelephu, Sarpang, Bhutan



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