Stories of grief

Stories of grief

A Story by cheyenne s garcia

I have not slept in years
fearsome of your dying
dreams like rainfall, winter is forevermore

For I lose track
and sleep is like hell, here
for without reality
I bleed and bend the truth like a screw
the wind
the breath the tears
the end. 

I followed the crowd, leaning on the truth
for without a sound
the pollution is anew...
and the end is the beginning and the deaf are finally listening, a grave sound is aloof and now I find the truth. 

for the blind are free, and the beautiful are damned. 
I am a non-believer of finding demand.

© 2022 cheyenne s garcia


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Cheyenne,

A beautifully expressed and most poignant piece of heartfelt writing here that definitely touches me in my life, most especially these following lines that really speak to me of where I am today, this minute:

"the end is the beginning and the deaf are finally listening, a grave sound is aloof and now I find the truth. for the blind are free, and the beautiful are damned."

Marve

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cheyenne s garcia

10 Months Ago

All my love - Cheyenne S Garcia



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Cheyenne,

A beautifully expressed and most poignant piece of heartfelt writing here that definitely touches me in my life, most especially these following lines that really speak to me of where I am today, this minute:

"the end is the beginning and the deaf are finally listening, a grave sound is aloof and now I find the truth. for the blind are free, and the beautiful are damned."

Marve

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cheyenne s garcia

10 Months Ago

All my love - Cheyenne S Garcia
There seems to be a disconnect between the first two stanzas and the last two. You might work on a way to establish a unity through the whole of the poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The words were strong and understandable.
"for the blind are free, and the beautiful are damned.
I am a non-believer of finding demand."
The above lines. I did like. You described the new world dear friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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cheyenne s garcia
cheyenne s garcia

San Jose, CA



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Still finding my way, i long to be beautiful. i aspire to be near deep dwelling stories of friends old and new. i am passionate about myself firstly by being present. i enjoy the ocean collecting rock.. more..

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