Me and You

Me and You

A Poem by cheyenne s garcia

I love the ocean
I think I can spend all my days there
Hoping to love more deeply, be wild and careless; and remembering who I am
Because we do not have forever, and nothing is guaranteed
So just spend a little time away
To be beautiful and not fade to grey
To be free and love endlessly
Away Away, Away from today. Because tomorrow is more beautiful.
And once more I find peace in the midst of forgetting time.

© 2022 cheyenne s garcia


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I connected so much to this piece because the beach is my happy place. I feel like when I'm there, everything makes sense and my mind feels so so much clearer. It's truly a beautiful poem ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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"I find peace in the midst of forgetting time." Such a well-written line, and YES, I do " find peace in the midst of forgetting time."

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I think we all need special places to get away to. I find being near the river or ocean can give me a different perspective. I find water calming, even though it can be troubled. I know it won't be for long. A lovely poem Cheyenne. Finding a place of peace is something we should all aim for.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


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A beautifully hopeful poem. One that resonates with me because I'm about 12 miles away from the ocean. Despite that I don't often get the chance to go and see it. Which is a shame because I take that chance of seeing true beauty for granted, and I end up fooling myself into believing I will have plenty of time to go there. It becomes a regret of mine. Your poem and its message holds so much truth in it. Thank you for sharing Cheyenne.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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cheyenne s garcia
cheyenne s garcia

San Jose, CA



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Still finding my way, i long to be beautiful. i aspire to be near deep dwelling stories of friends old and new. i am passionate about myself firstly by being present. i enjoy the ocean collecting rock.. more..

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