not so funny

And on a dark day I find myself between, and I learn to find a new meaning. I grow into something beautiful. Fully I am withstanding, and the bold ties underway make for a wonderful story. And in the dead of the night on a winter fall I lose everything to the gamble of a sheer passerby chanting prayers underfoot. As I listen, I ponder the pressures of reality. Hoping to catch wind of another, I lost another battle in the mirrors of fate. And now I know I was always awake. Not asleep not dead not sick in the head, but alive and well off. But as I reel inside the workings of every-thing I learn truths never spotted. A reckoning long shot  from the guilty and rotten. Better yet, forgotten.  

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The negatives in the mind can play havoc. It's far wiser to search for the positives. Too much negativity can distort, lead to much unhappiness. Move away from the darkness if you want to stay sane. That's how I read your lines Cheyenne. Thank you fir sharing.

Chris

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Cheyenne,

You have clearly set to pen of page some very contemplatively meditative philosophical thoughts as sweetly written poetic lines ... Very enjoyable reading here ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

[keith]

'dead of the night on a winter fall'
winter fall ... a dimensional twist
so easy to read and get caught in the swim of things
thanks may i have another?

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The in-betweens can be the hardest; not knowing whether to back up or forge ahead, taking stock of everything around us, looking for the empty puzzle place our jigsaw piece of life fits. I enjoyed this write.

[Patricia]

Oh, I really like this! Very good! Great surreal feel and revelation in it