Bitten

each give [ takes a little out of me ]

blind lovers take a spin

till there's nothing left within

left with a letter titled

lovers fickle and thin

rather be full then halfway

rather be with a heavy heart 

[ content ]

than juxtaposed with your strangled arms 

pulling me closer and closer 

Far from myself

bad taste in worse cases

always a hunger

long lost 

[ forged lovers ]

unevenly raveled laces

nothings perfect

worn out patent faces

Reviews

[T.S. Ulmus]

I had to read it four times, but it was interesting enough that I wanted to read it four times. Many great turns of phrase and good imagery to. I like the "unevenly raveled laces"

[cheyenne s garcia]

thank you !