Jealousy

   Little green monster
   they call jealousy
   peeks through the depths
   to make you angry

   It makes me angry
   this little thing
   makes me cry
   that little thing

   Mad at him
   Mad at her
   for no reason
   because of jealousy

Author's Note

My emotions have to come out some way :'(

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Jealousy,can be dangerous and very exhausting. To me it's a heinous emotion. Short but to the point.

[♥ Kinnixk]

God I hate that little monster.
I agree with EMF about making it a bit longer but I like it the way it is as well :)

[Blindfolded]

It's a beast that can cause so much pain in our lives. You try your best to control for as long as you can but eventually it may win. With that said..it can be a good emotion for us as well it's all in how we control it.

[GunMetal]

That pretty much sums it up. You have to try and not let this beast devour you. Know that each day can bring about a stronger you.

[EMF]

Simple and straightforward. The only thing that would benefit this work is making it longer, adding a touch of bitterness. From other works you've written you certainly have the skill. As it stands it is a good poem. It could be a great one with just a little edge to it.
Your flow and theme are strong, your language forthright. But, mine is only an opinion. Desn't mean I'm right about the edge. Personal taste is all.
As it stands, cracking work.