The special one

just a poem I wrote....its not really about anybody

 Why can't you just try?
  I'm waiting here for you
  You are my special one
   but where have you gone?

   What happened between us?
   We used to be so close
    but now you've gone away
    Will we ever be together?

    Do you dream about me?
     I dream about you
     we need to be together
      because your my special one

Author's Note

This one was bad but I still tried....my emotions have been messed up lately

Reviews

[realmwriter]

NO it is not bad. It just needs some polish perhaps but it is not bad. Emotions are not easy to deal with so we wright. Poetry helps me, it's cathartic, but it doesn't work for others. Seems to work for you just fine. Nicely done.