Life

bored so I wrote this

              Life is like a river

              flowing so free

              Life is like a flower

              always blooming

             always dying

             Life is about

             choices that you make

             Life is so much better

            with you in it

Reviews

[Tapher]

a very good descriptive peice with a hint of love at the end, good work :)

[A]

I really liked this. :D I would have changed a few things around, such as, "Life is like a river, flowing free," instead of, "Life is like a river, flowing so free," or maybe even, "Life is a river, - bla, I lost my train of thought. Some things could have just been shaped up a bit though.

I do have to say, regardless of the shape needing, this is one of the best pieces I have ever read on Writers Cafe. Very nice work. :D