Girls

Idk bored

             Us girls are so irresistible

              Soft hair

             full lips

            easy to impress

            always are so innocent

           but if you were us

           you would feel all the pain

           we try so hard to keep inside

           No wonder we have problems

Reviews

[Tapher]

proving your actions caused by your creation, great work.

[mystic soul]

this poem is really good..... especially last two lines.... well written poem......

[A]

Once again, it needs a little shaping up 'round the edges, but regardless, it's amazing. The last line subtracts from the rest of the poem a little bit though...

I'm failing at reviewing tonight. ;-;

Just like Life, this is getting added to my favourites. Nice work. You're very talented. ^^'