Joshua

About a boy

          Your eyes are like gray blue clouds

          they always seem to make me melt

          when I see them I feel like I can fall into them

          like they can protect me from anything.

          Your hair is that color

           that every girl loves

           Your face is like a flawless plain of sweetness

           Everytime I see a picture of you

           I feel like I want to be with you

           foreever and ever

Reviews

[Tapher]

perfect love poem for anyone to read :)

[Rose Angel]

OMG! You so like him! Chey you are so sneaky when it comes to boys!

[Emily B]

very pretty

[StoryTailor]

Hmm... There's a few things that need to be done, just typos or grammatical errors. But lets see what else...
I don't know, but for some reason the poem seemed off for me. It didn't ... click, maybe? I'm not sure, I'm not a poet myself, I'm more of a short story kind of guy. But There's something about it that sets me off. Other then that, it's great. It's got the emotion needed in a poem and everything. I'm sorry I couldn't tell you exactly what it was that I found off about it. But I don't seem to have the proper adjectives... Other then that, it was great. And I commend you for a job well done.

[Tiff-AH!-knee�]

gurgus?