The Knowing

The Knowing

A Poem by Damian Alan Gray
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apathetic rejection

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Don’t you know
why I
Do what I do
and I
Take what I take
and I
Have what I have
and I
Had what I had
and I
Believe what I believe
and I
Don’t know you.
 

© 2008 Damian Alan Gray


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Wow, absolutely great job in keeping the purpose and having absolutely outstanding meter. We don't seem to know who this speaker is or who she's talking to which adds mystery to the work. The meter of this poem was outstanding, and I could only wish I could put some of it into my poetry. Absolutely loved reading this. Overall: Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was like a frisbee being thrown and skiped allong the ground with each two lines, till it fell still in the mud at the end
I loved the way this was writen.
I felt the ups and downs like a bouncy road, that came to a dead end!
Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Damian Alan Gray
Damian Alan Gray

Spring Hill, FL



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