You

Your smile is so sweet
So innocent
So adorable
So filled with secrets

Your eyes are so bright
so beautiful
so strong
and so mischievous

Your heart is so big
So Caring
So Loving
And yet so guarded

Your arms are so powerful
so strong
so safe
and are so inviting.

You my darling
My love
My Amor
My soul mate

Are so charming
So adoring
So fascinating
and so affectionate

You, my sweetheart
Are my one and only
my Future and my Present
My Right now

I want you in my life
For all eternity
For  as long as the sky stretches
and the birds sing

You, my darling
Are my everything
And you make me whole
And make my heart sing.

and .:I love you:.

Author's Note

i dont know what i was trying to do here. just some scattered thoughts... descriptions.

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful love poem, I too have a soul mate and so kudos to you. Nice write.

[Dianna Reneé]

Scattered thoughts tend to make for great poems. Amazing poem.

[brainelation]

i like the way that you spaced things out. the vertical orientation of the poem gives it a lot. also, the way that you contrasted the sweet things and the (idk what to call them) things, such as; "beautiful, strong, mischievous." or "caring, loving, guarded." it gives the poem a nice rhythm. it might be good to try and stick with a constant rhythm instead of varying it as the poem progresses though. all in all though, it serves as a vivid description of love, without skipping over all of the other person's flaws, and gives the reader a warm fuzzy feeling after reading. it's easy to tell you care : ]