Waiting...

i wrote this when my aunt was dying of cancer and no one in my family would tell me what was going on. i felt like i was a little kid again with a really bad feeling and i was so confused and out of the loop and this was the only way i could explain it af

So many problems

So little time

All cause drama

All become fine...

Results are in

They are they are

What do they say?

No where near where we are

I wish and wish

And hope with fear

That they are good

And gone with drear

Our luck is bad

We need a new streak

But what do we do

All we have is HOPE, and it's starting to weep.

Reviews

[brainelation]

this is amazing...
you're sleeping on the couch next to me, and i'm tempted to wake you up to tell you how awesome this is.
it does a great job of expressing the confusion and frustration that comes with being out of the loop, especially about something as important as this. it also does a good job portraying the fact that even when you don't know what's going on, you can still feel the badness of what's going on. you disprove the saying "no news is good news." which is good, because that saying sucks and is totally a lie.
love you
-josh