Waves

Waves,

Like our life,

Sometimes it's up,

Sometimes it's down.

 

But we never

Give up for anything,

Because we have hope.

 

If we give up,

How can we sucess?

We should stand

Straight.

 

Our life is

Like waves.

But we are strong

To fight against it.

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

Another amazing poem. But it's kind of chinglish, if you ask me. Still, the imagery and point is very descriptive and it can really related to our lives.