Miracle

Do you believe in miracle?

Miracle,

Sometimes happen,

But is it true?

I don't think so.

 

Some believe

Miracle,

Some do not.

What about you?

 

Believing miracle

Sometimes make you lazy.

We should try our best

All the time.

 

You can belive in it,

But don't make

Yourself lazy.

Always try to do your BEST.

 

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

I believe in miracles, in fact I see the every day.
It's not wise to depend on them to happen.
Part of life's mysteries, miracles.
I loved your poem.
I never thought that miracles
Could make you lazy.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

That sounds like something a wise Elder would say. this is a delightful piece of writing. I agree, with you about the 'lazy' part. I do believe in miracles, but one needs to take action to help the miracles happen.
Very, very nice work!

[stars are far]

this is so nice ..
for me i don't believe in miracles ..
but i hope you do :)

[stars are far]

this is so nice ..
for me i don't believe in miracles ..
but i hope you do :)

[Jackson Lai]

Love it....