Birthday

Everyone have a birthday...

Birthday,

Everyone have one,

We love it

So much.

 

Some of them have

Birthday presents.

Some of them don't.

 

We give birth to

All babies.

But some of them

Left them all alone

With no birthdays.

 

There are so much

We can help them.

We can make them

Come to our

Wonderful world.

Reviews

[Anson L]

Wonderful

[christeechung ♥]

Cherry,It's really nice,I loves your writing! It's interesting and very nice~ =] Write more poems~~

[Niki Wilson]

Dear Cherry Lai,
This is wonderful!? its so true.. some people leave birthdays out (:O)
~ Inspire ~

[Fontane Wong]

Well penned... Really agree with you for those who have no birthdays and give them our best wishes. The sick and hunger has stolen their birthday away, it's quite unfair though. We should help as much as we can to others, as this is what peace and love mean.