Falling in Love

Everyone falls in love sometimes...

Falling in Love,

Someone caught

Our first sight.

Loving us.

 

They love us

So much.

Making us fall inside

The world of love. 

 

Love is so powerful!

Falling in love make

Us forgot things that

Are bad.

 

Falling in love,

Never break your

Lovers heart.

Protect their

Fragile heart. 

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Very endearing poem
Most people worry about
Protecting their on heart
What a loving person
You must be
Very sweet poem.

[Fontane Wong]

Another well planned poem. Still, I want to point out some places that can make improvments.
1: The words and sentences can stretch longer in each sentences
2: To present the emotion nice and clear
3: Use different kinds of words, that can color your poem

These are little suggestions that I'd like to give you, if you can have more improvments(which I mean, your poem now is very excellent, but there's area to improve), your poem is going to be superb.

[Niki Wilson]

Ahhh... Sweet!