My Shining Star

You are my star...

My shining star,

Who is it?

My friends

And family.

 

You always stand

By side.

Like a part of

My life.

 

You love me

Quietly.

Sometimes we

Don't see.

 

You are my

Shining star.

My family,

My friend.

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

It's another masterpiece. Your writing often surrounds families, friends and loves around us. I often fell in love with your poem too. Still, I think it would be better if you make the poem longer. It's a bit too short if you ask me, if you can make it longer, it would be better and it would be perfect.

P.S You can also use some more other words not just a area of words that you only have, each sentence can add more adjectives to describe